Posted by sirina on July 07, 2002 at 19:41:23:
This is pretty good stuff, with the exception of a good charactor development for the submissive, which I find two demensional at best. However, I do find His scenes very eroctic, in a very basic and wonderful way.
So many BDSM writers try to make scenes that are over the top, when actually the basic theme of the relationship is the truly erotic part.
So there, I find the Author's charactor's lacking depth, the submissive personal storyline inplausible, but his scenes very erotic.
sirina
aka
"gimme a mind fuck any day"